BLANDILOQUENT COMMENTS ON SULEKHA BLOGGERS-III
BLANDILOQUENT COMMENTS ON SULEKHA BLOGGERS-III
On Yashji’s “ Thought For The Day”11TH OF JULY 2008 A woman riding on the back of his lover!
Lovely quote and this is what I wrote prompted by the quote:-
Lovely quote and this is what I wrote prompted by the quote:-
LOVE FINELY FLUTTERS!
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Nothing seems heavy when
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Nothing seems heavy when
You are smitten with love deep
When love seizes you in arms
So pretty yet delicately and sleek
Who would then not love lovingly keep
Always in heart treasured, and shower
It abundantly when meeting a bonny soulmate
With chubby cheeks: looks fair and beautiful
Her arms slender and love she blindly tenders
And brimming with love, a rosy heart surrenders!
(2)
When love seizes you in arms
So pretty yet delicately and sleek
Who would then not love lovingly keep
Always in heart treasured, and shower
It abundantly when meeting a bonny soulmate
With chubby cheeks: looks fair and beautiful
Her arms slender and love she blindly tenders
And brimming with love, a rosy heart surrenders!
(2)
The Ultimate Revelation(EYC#29) Yashji’s contribution
Loved your piece and the contents touching the heart all at once! But my hands compel me to send you this quick piece on what ego brings!
Ego
The moment we shun ego
We surpass human race
To heaven we straight go
It’s the ego that divides
Men from men,
One from another
Nation from nation
Ego, the cause of all ills
But clothes it all of us still
Shunning it, needs will
May we soon learn,
The harm it brings in turn
Let us all awake, ego,
We once for all kill
And then make the world
A place where in peace
You, me and everyone
Begin living ego shun!
(I) Ego
The moment we shun ego
We surpass human race
To heaven we straight go
It’s the ego that divides
Men from men,
One from another
Nation from nation
Ego, the cause of all ills
But clothes it all of us still
Shunning it, needs will
May we soon learn,
The harm it brings in turn
Let us all awake, ego,
We once for all kill
And then make the world
A place where in peace
You, me and everyone
Begin living ego shun!
(3)
Yashji’s comments on my verse and my poetic return!
You and I share the views same
For ills of police we them blame
Morality thy name is bogging down
Day and night we are left to frown
My country nay the whole world too
Is badly sagging down in the swamp
Of greed, feeding on the dirty dross!
(4)
For ills of police we them blame
Morality thy name is bogging down
Day and night we are left to frown
My country nay the whole world too
Is badly sagging down in the swamp
Of greed, feeding on the dirty dross!
(4)
On DSampath’s management theories in the narrative:-
Beena'a Dairy
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Cows with udders perfect
Whence you your ideas get
The management principles
Of dairy farming, you profess
Failed miserably as usual
And Beena's straight approach
Looks always the best!
In the meanwhile jot another piece
With your unusual management tips
Discriminating not ever the jersey cow
And a domestic one or a technology shun
Let your approach hence be simple ever
Prove your self not the consultant clever
Beena is your Guru , surpass her no one!
(Hope you will enjoy my poetic comments in true sense!)
(5)
FAKE DOCTORS : Yashji’s comments and my return comments:-
Whence you your ideas get
The management principles
Of dairy farming, you profess
Failed miserably as usual
And Beena's straight approach
Looks always the best!
In the meanwhile jot another piece
With your unusual management tips
Discriminating not ever the jersey cow
And a domestic one or a technology shun
Let your approach hence be simple ever
Prove your self not the consultant clever
Beena is your Guru , surpass her no one!
(Hope you will enjoy my poetic comments in true sense!)
(5)
FAKE DOCTORS : Yashji’s comments and my return comments:-
Thanks for the sharp comments.You are very right society as a whole today is lost in the lure of money n power.
Fake Men Fake Women
Men and women are hungry for power
Men and women are hungery for money
Who has the time for temple,dome,tower
For them everything else is false and fake
God have mercy on all still let them awake
In the glory of the sunshine there to seek
God who dwells in the haughty and the meek.
(May be the input you provide be the stuff for my next verse!)
Fake Men Fake Women
Men and women are hungry for power
Men and women are hungery for money
Who has the time for temple,dome,tower
For them everything else is false and fake
God have mercy on all still let them awake
In the glory of the sunshine there to seek
God who dwells in the haughty and the meek.
(May be the input you provide be the stuff for my next verse!)
Kaliavijay
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